HorseradishCares

Don't feel like editing my last update, so here's a new one: Check that--just scored my eighth. Proud of myself, really, thought I'd get around to doing less. That was ...

Hi Paladin, I'd like to say that I absolutely loved the whole thing but, sadly, I can't. There's a few bugs here and there, which makes me have to dislike ...

'Sup, buddy, lookin' for a review? Probably not, but you've reviewed a couple of mine so I'll return the favour. ;) You slip right through crinkled fingers...of paper. Yeah, probably ...

I've done four, which is bad. I would do more but today is cleaning day at my house. Whoopie. I'll try to do a couple more before it's all over. ...

Salutations! I must say, I am near speechless at the pure quality of this work! It's astounding the imagery you weaved into every line of this... It's...spectacular! I barely have ...

Hi, All in all, I believe that this is a brilliant piece. The story you weave into it is amazing, you are clearly a wonderful writer. I just had a ...

Hey there! I thought this piece was very thoughtful and peaceful (except for the odd harshness every now and then). I've always liked the idea of the stars and moon ...

Originally for lilymoore's contest, I liked it, so I decided to post. Enjoy. Marked; You're marked—deadly, beautiful, the best type of disease. You taste of grit, salt of the earth, ...

Hibiscus~~~~ I could have, really, added more action. I'll do that next time--maybe when I write a sequel. Ooooh. Wouldn't that be fun? And it was extremely happy, which is ...

The kid stuffs soft toys full of cement and bribes people! I...could see her swearing, haha.

Written entirely for amusement and ultraviolet's contest: Short Story and Script Randomness This, in all truth, is randomness at my best. I think my brain died when I wrote it, ...

Hey, I entered that contest as well! I liked this one, not for it's sheer wordiness or anything, but because it was enjoyable and funny. I'd have to agree with ...

First of all, I have to this I found this absolutely hilarious. The randomness of it just made it for me. The characterization of the man was amazing! He reminds ...

Written as a contest entry for: Critiques and general comments are welcome--I don't expect much. ;) Click Clack; A peeled orange is sat within a crack, A crack that's as ...

Hello, Overall, I thought this to be a bit short and too unrevealing for my tastes. There should be some mystery but you didn't really describe the main character at ...