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Kia or Brittany. Male, around 20 or so, is a frazzled writer who struggles desperately (but silently) with depression. Has honey blonde hair, hazel eyes, and is moderately built. Has ...

What We Are; My feet are black with inherent soot, Fingers splayed to let sunlight in, Dark brown eyes flecked with worry. My suit's rumpled exterior means nothing, dear, I'm ...

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*taps* Could I get a review, please? Nothing specific because, I'd like to know how it is overall, I guess. :)

I would like a review, pleeeeaaaassseeee. It's a poem: Thank you!!!!! :D

I would, pwease? It's a poem, haha, if you wanted to know... Thank you!

I was wondering if I could get a review on my poem, please?: Thank you, you're the best! Hopefully your claws will dig out the wonder and terrible-ness of it. ...

Good day, Chap, Here to give you an unneeded review, as always. Maybe you'll laugh some more by the end. ;) At the beginning of the concrete, we meet

I was wondering if I could get a review? It's of this poem: Thanks! :D

Hello, I have to agree with Freak on the fact that I didn't get the connection at all to electric stimulation of the heart at all until I read the ...

Diana; You sit in the corner, tittering quietly to friends, One swooning maroon sleeve creeping down your sloping Shoulder like a guilty confederate soldier. I think I'm in love with ...

I...don't like the word "encompass" in this, and what does "like the surface of my touch is smooth"? The rest of it is better than before, but the ending ruins ...

Wrote this awhile back after seeing this amazing picture I don't have anymore, which was of a kitchen knife covered in blood with this little plastic heart necklace dangling from ...

Okay, so.... I found it all to be a bit drab as whole. I'm not really into romantic poetry so that might be it. Who knows. The lines just come ...

Okay, first of all, "no ordinary" anything is grammatically incorrect. Whoever taught you that that wording was correct should be slapped upside the head a few dozen times. It makes ...