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Re: Turning My Back
Thank you, thank you - it's really great to hear from a veteran of this site, and from someone whose works I have read and admired! I hear what you're ...
Aug 7, 2012 -
Re: Turning My Back
Thank you, that probably stems from the fact that I'm more of a prose writer than a poetry one, but I was in the mood for some poetry so I ...
Aug 7, 2012 -
Re: Princess Turned Knight - Prolouge
Devil's Fire and Devils' Fire are both acceptable ways of indicating the possessive. Devil's Fire can ALSO mean 'Devil is Fire' but that depends upon context; in this context, it, ...
Jun 12, 2012 -
Re: Religion supports and destroys the world
I can't offer much in the form of a review, other than I thought that was a picture for a second until I read your description, so good work! ^.^
Jun 3, 2012 -
Re: Enslaved Chapter 1 Scene 2
Good, good, I notice an improvement immediately from this scene and the last. There's not much for me to fault here; you've built the mood well, the sense of melancholy ...
Jun 1, 2012 -
Re: Lightning In The Office Of Reality
Just alerting you to the fact that the story mustn't have copied across or something. Sorry to be the bearer of bad news!
Apr 18, 2012