Horizon

This doesn't flow like a good poem; it's an experiment I'm doing to see if I can, in fact, write a story using poetic form. It's an excerpt. The character ...

@ancientforever - Thank you for the feedback. As with your signature, poetic license is my one true love and as such I like using it whenever I write poetry. I ...

Thank you. I work on short poems because I find the longer I write, the more I lose focus and I like having a certain point in mind when writing, ...

Hey, so I'm Izon and I'ma review your work here... I like it. I do. It's a nifty idea... but I feel like it could flow a lot better. I ...

Criticism is welcome, I wish to improve. This is a writing forum, after all, is it not? Logophile Mutilated Where was she when the love of words was obliterated by ...

Thanks for everything already, guys. It's pretty fabulous. I've surfed these forums a lot so I've got how things work, but it's nice to be a member finally. @Incognito - ...

So hey, I'm Izon and I'm going to review these pieces for you. After the first read, I found them to be somewhat aesthetically displeasing. Of course, like all literature, ...

Hey, I'm Izon and I'm going to review your poems. From the initial reading, I really enjoyed your poetry and I believe you have strong talent. With a little TLC, ...

Hey there, ancientforever. I'm Izon, and I'm going to do a quick review of your poem. Truth is... I like it. I like its simplicity and its attitude. But I ...

Hey, I'm Horizon. If you don't want to call me that, then that's ace, as you can just shorten it to "Izon" (I would say Hor, but... obvious implications...). I've ...