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Re: Chapter 2.1, The Name Game
Yeah, I did read it as dismayed, but more of a "shucks I'm just so hot" kind of vibe. ;) Maybe thats just me tho. Sorry for the crappiness of ...
Sep 4, 2015 -
Re: [Insert Dramatic Title Here]- Chapter One
By saying "my junior" I did mean younger. Also, table 24 was originally Aspen's, the guy she was talking to in the beginning about his burger. He asked Hailey if ...
Sep 3, 2015 -
Re: The Profane Parables and Other Nihilistic Narrations by a Perverse Pariah, 5
I don't know why my quote looks so strange, sorry!
Sep 3, 2015 -
Re: The Profane Parables and Other Nihilistic Narrations by a Perverse Pariah, 5
I did look up a source and realized that I have been taught the British form of punctuation for quotes, which is why you disagree! Therefore, do it as they ...
Sep 3, 2015 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.07)
There is a rule, but if the two adjectives can't be interchanged without changing how it sounds, there doesn't need to be a comma there. So for example, with the ...
Aug 28, 2015 -
Re: [Insert Dramatic Title Here]
Ooopps, this was supposed to be labeled as the prologue haha
Aug 20, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 1, The Name Game
The first sentence is attention grabbing, but I think if you changed it to flow better, it would have the same effect, just my opinion. The Tatiana thing (cracks me ...
Jul 22, 2015 -
Re: Stoneslide - Prologue Part 1
haha thanks! Yeah, I would explain the young mice thing. :) I'll be reviewing your next section asap. :)
Feb 26, 2015 -
Re: Untitled
The point of the story was to use the last word of a sentence as the first word in the next sentence, so that's why the wording is kind of ...
Nov 25, 2014 -
Re: Alone Together ~ Prologue
Thank you!
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: Alone Together ~ Prologue
Thank you!
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: Alone Together ~ Prologue
Ahhh thank you so much, this was exactly what I needed! :)
Oct 4, 2014 -
Re: A War With No End Chapter 8
Hello again! “Impossible, there is no way they could have found us already! The exits were hidden!” Who says this? Now it was a lead weight, pressing down on my ...
Aug 14, 2014 -
Re: A War With No End Chapter 3
Hi! Here again! I'll just jump right in. Getting bounced off hard surfaces while you’re pretty sure that someone bigger and stronger than you is laughing their head off at ...
Aug 12, 2014 -
Re: Ink ~ Chapter Five
Haha, I will be sure to post on your wall! :D Thank you so much for the review!
Jul 13, 2013