Hopeful_Youth

An interesting beginning to the story. But, where is the train taking you?

awwwwwwww, i love Jasper's character and his accent! so cute! there's just one thing, though. this sentence is worded a little weird at the end: I" nodded my head. I ...

The first chapter is pretty descriptive, which i like. lol. but maybe, more of an intro. I mean, you just start reading the story and WHAM! there's faeries, werewolves and ...

wow. i really like it.... The way you wrote it, like one sentence , with no punctuation, really adds to the whole "sandstorm effect". I really like it, but maybe ...

A ghost of my past haunts my dreams Shallow breathing, Shaking hands A whisper in the shadows of my mind. It doesn't want to let me forget, but i Will ...

I love the truth to this poem, because it's a simple fact that if you trust anyone, you will soon get hurt. everyone goes through life with pain, and i ...

Tell me if you think the plot is cheezy, k? Dreaming of You... Ashley has lived in Oxford, Washington all her life. The typical city girl living in a small ...

Hey everyone, My names Megan and im new to this site. I'd love to meet some new people and get to know you. just ask me and i'll review your ...

wow........that's really beautiful and full of meaning. it's great. you should get it published in some kind of poetry book. I actually have one of my own silly poems in ...