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Re: Evil
My opinion is poetry is about raw emotions being scrawled across a page. The length doesn't matter, some of my favorite poetry is short. Also poems that go on for ...
Nov 1, 2007 -
Re: Evil
[pre] Hatred , seething black and tar like through my veins. Rage , red and hot blinding me. Evil , constantly trying to escape from inside of me. Can't stop ...
Oct 31, 2007 -
Re: sausage roll
lol :D I was young when I made it up. I am still just as random though.
Oct 28, 2007 -
Re: sausage roll
I have a sausage roll, It fell into a hole. It went down really far, And now it is a car!! :D
Oct 26, 2007 -
Re: Phone call
I really think the biscut was the best bit in the whole thing. :lol:
Oct 26, 2007 -
Re: Which Planet Would You Travel To?
Personally I would rather go deep sea diving. I don't understand why humans seem to be so obsessed with exploring space. We haven't even begun to scratch the surface of ...
Aug 23, 2007 -
Re: Sunny Days
Thanks for that, my spelling and punctuation are not very good i know :)
May 10, 2007 -
Re: Sunny Days
Sunny days, Burning fire, Careful consideration of my attire. Heart aflutter, Face like stone, Will you let me take you home? Wishful thinking, Teary eyes, God my life is full ...
May 3, 2007 -
Re: replay
its all good :)
Apr 15, 2007 -
Re: Pit
thanks heaps Alainna!!! :) your probably right Thriving Fire it did actually start off as a poem, but then the music entered my head. i might think about redoing it, ...
Apr 11, 2007 -
Re: replay
riiight
Apr 8, 2007 -
Re: Pit
Ok so im still not sure bout the name. Also i am shy so be kind. (V1) I have so much life, In front of me. But there is so ...
Apr 6, 2007 -
Re: The Fire Within
that was very good, i like your style!!
Apr 6, 2007 -
Re: .
man this is very good, but im a bit confused, it might just be me, but the fence is a metaphor for death or an actuall fence, maybe both? other ...
Apr 6, 2007 -
Re: and i move through this masquerade
i love the image it puts into my mind, just the right amount of discription!! i have no other constructive thing to say sorry
Apr 6, 2007
