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Re: [September Contest] The Postman
Thanks for the reviews everyone! When I edit, I'll be sure to refer back to these reviews! -HP
Sep 15, 2010 -
Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?
Hey Skins! So I wrote a short story for the week long contest and was wondering if you would review it for me! Here's the link: Please and thank you! ...
Sep 13, 2010 -
Re: ~ Reviews from the Dynamic Duo ~
Oooh, 4 for the price of 1! As up front payment for the services of you 4 musketeers, here is a musketeers bar. 8) Okay, so here's the link! It's ...
Sep 13, 2010 -
Re: [September Contest] The Postman
The postman breathed heavily, wiping his eyes as he felt fresh blood drip into them. He knew that there was no way to make it out of here alive. All ...
Sep 13, 2010 -
Re: What, for a Surfboard Rodent?
Hello Ilya! (or do you prefer 'Eelz'?) Welcome to YWS! As Griffin said, the is sort of disjointed. However, the entire thing kept me hooked, I'm not exactly sure why. ...
Sep 13, 2010 -
Re: The Roller Coaster
Hey Elinor! You decided to grace me with one of your reviews, so I shall do the same! I really liked this story, partly because it was so well done ...
Sep 13, 2010 -
Re: The Twin Terror: A Storybook Created by Snoink and Grif
Turbo thought for a moment. Griffins? He knew what those were, they were the flying things! His goat and llama professors had always told him that he was dumber than ...
Sep 11, 2010 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
Time of Incident (include your timezone): Multiple times from 7-8 pm Mountain Time Browser: Google Chrome Page You Were On: Log-In page Describe What Happened: I type in my user ...
Sep 10, 2010 -
Re: Harry Potter Rapping Battle
***So I was thinking about Harry Potter one day, and this is what came of it! The rating is due to the reference of Ron's rat sleeping in his bed ...
Sep 10, 2010 -
Re: Unfortunately; Fortunately
**It's kind of like the Marsmen are experimenting on mankind... or it's all just the Matrix.** Fortunately, the Marsmen told them of a lonely hermit who could send them on ...
Sep 10, 2010 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]
This is me about about 2-3 months ago, no idea where the expression came from. *Edit* - I'm shaving my head soon though, baldness is equal to awesomeness.
Sep 9, 2010 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish 2
Granted, but then you read a whole novel full of terrible grammar, and it replays over and over in your head forever. :shock: I wish that I could communicate with ...
Sep 9, 2010 -
Re: Bear Lake
Thanks for the reviews everyone! I'll be sure to use your input when I rewrite. Elinor, the first half of the story was actually from the lake's point of view. ...
Sep 9, 2010 -
Re: Aren: Guardian Angel
Hey Baywolf, HP again! :) I haven't reviewed anything for a few days, so I saw yours and thought that I would! First off, this is a great concept. Angels ...
Sep 9, 2010 -
Re: The Twin Terror: A Storybook Created by Snoink and Grif
*Turbo* Breathing inside a paper bag, Turbo walked along. Of course, he couldn't be a superhero if people constantly pointed at him and gave him strange looks. He had to ...
Sep 9, 2010
