HomelessPorcupine

Hey Mizzle! I have one for you so that you can win the bet! As an experiment, I've been trying to write in a sort of different style than I ...

Hey there Queen! Before I get started on the review, I wanted to say that this story is developing really well. A lot of people tend to think that the ...

Hey Sierra! This was interesting. Before I give you the critique, I wanted to say that though you can definitely tell that this was a spur-of-the-moment piece, it was well ...

...I decided to run away, but ran into an open locker instead and...

Hello Sailor! Before I start the critique part of the review, I want to say that this really hit me. This is a good message that is ignored too often ...

Hey there Baywolf! So first off, I really like this story so far. Your take on Pandora's personality is great and makes me laugh. I especially like the rebirth idea. ...

Thanks for the input Creative! I was going to call you 'Mr. Freak', but decided I liked the name 'Creative' instead. I'll be sure to take your review into account ...

Heya S.S. Rose! This is very interesting, albeit a bit confusing at times. As I was reading it, I had to stop and think about what was going on, and ...

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Here's one! Despite what it may seem like, it is realistic fiction. I read that you enjoyed critiquing realistic more than fantasy, so just thought that I would give you ...

*So this started out as just a random short story that I was writing, and then it just took shape. Hope you enjoy, and thank you for the critiques!* Feeling ...

Thanks! I'm glad that it wasn't completely terrible! I went to English yesterday, and was chosen to read it in front of the class, so I guess that the Professor ...

Hello Aspiring Author! I can't really add much to what has already been said, but I will give you my bit of opinion. This paragraph seems like it's the intro ...

Hello everyone! I had to write a two page essay for English, and I thought that I would run it by you guys to see what you think. I just ...

((Sorry for taking so long to respond with the edit guys, school, work and all that stuff. You'll notice that I didn't take all of the goriness out. I tried, ...