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Hello! That was really great! Hmm... I have to think about what this all means. It sounds like a religious battle with ones self. But it could be anything. I ...

Anytime! XP Sorry for screwing up on that! XD

Beautiful!

Thanks! I'll get on it! :-D I didn't even know comma splices were a thing until tonight! >.> Thanks for pointing them out!

Ah, cool! XD

Oh, I guess I didn't mention his name in this chapter ( I did in the prologue, it's Corbin ). Well, he doesn't think he's in a hospital... and you'll ...

XD What's this 'Agents of Shield' you mentioned? I hope I'm not too close to it. I don't think it will be. But you never know!

Thanks for the awesome review! I'll get to those mistakes, and stuff. :-D

Thank you! I will get on those mistakes right away! :-D

Thanks! Um... I just got it. XD I don't even remember when... Where did who finally end up?

Thanks! Um... I just got it. XD I don't even remember when... Where did who finally end up?

Thanks so much! Yeah, there's a lot I wanted to show people... but in the process, I guess I got carried away! >.< Originally, I was looking for a disease ...

Thanks Griffin! I'm glad you liked it!

Thank you, Noelle! I keep this all in mind.

Thank you so much! I've been on my tip-toes waiting to here what people think. XD I thought it would be good as a prologue only because I'm writing the ...