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  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Borderline

    Hello! Thank you for sharing your story! I really like the opening of this story- it reads like a poem, which I think you intended! At first I was a ...

    Jan 16, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Paths Crossed chapter 10

    Hey! Happy Review Day!! Wow, that was a wild ride! I did not expect to be so into this chapter- usually when I jump in on a chapter in the ...

    Jan 31, 2021
  • Article / Essay » Narrative, Politics Re: Oh My Word

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    For training purposes: P***.

    Jul 20, 2020
  • Article / Essay » Politics, Realistic Re: a question to society part one

    Hello! I'd love to give you a review today- I think I will!! I enjoy works like this, where I get to think about the questions and concerns kinda being ...

    Jul 17, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Frozen Past - Chapter Twenty Two

    Hello there! I have this strong feeling that I've read and reviewed one of the chapters in this series before... but I'm not sure! I think your strength is descriptions ...

    Jul 14, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Realistic Re: The Last Words of Rory the Fourth

    Hey there! I decided to stop by and give your work a review! It seems like this is part of a bigger project/story, which is awesome! I could tell you ...

    Jul 13, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Lockdown Part 6.1

    Hello! It's interesting to see that you were inspired to write a story about a pandemic, I'm guessing that's due to the current state of the world! I have to ...

    May 5, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 19.1)

    Hello! I have to admit now that this was really well written, and that being aid, I'm struggling to think of things to critique! Not too many chapter 19's make ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Humor Re: A Lifetime (Chapter Four)

    Hey there! Just so you know, I have not read the previous chapters- I'm just going off of what's in this one, and trying to keep my critique relevant to ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Romantic Re: Love Part 6

    Hello! Happy Review Day! c: Oh man, I remember those days of have UNBEARABLE crushes on people and just not being able to think of anything but them constantly! I ...

    Mar 31, 2020
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: A lovers Disagreement.

    Hello! Happy Review Day! c: This was definitely pretty creepy and invoked a lot of thought within me about various things including about how people who are in abusive relationships ...

    Mar 31, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Successor, The Fall of Morrow (2)

    Hello! C: Wow! This is a pretty cool chapter. It definitely left me wanting to know what would happen next- and I especially was excite about meeting this Fuyus guy, ...

    Mar 31, 2020
  • Art » Historical Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: How Do You Plead: 6.1

    Hey CaptainJack! Well I was not expecting this when I walked in here! I really should start noticing ratings more, haha. Overall I feel like this chapter/part held up pretty ...

    Mar 31, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: Butterfly Wings - Chapter 4 - Rise

    Hello there! I thought I'd stop by to help rescue your work from the Green Room! This was definitely an interesting read! You have a really fun, distinct way of ...

    Mar 31, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Fantasy Re: Deleted

    Hey there, Dossereana! I'm trying to get back into the reviewing game, and thought I'd start with your chapter! c: Something I thought was worth noting is that I got ...

    Jan 16, 2020


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