Holyjoely

Wow, you sure are awesome! I write alot of action/sci-fi. What about you?

I haven't really read much work like this so it is hard for me to criticize this particular piece. Although I will say that I love your format, its very ...

For me it was a little too rushed although I do think that this story has potential. As mentioned above I think it would suit a childrens book, but with ...

Hello :D Dispite my handel, I prefered to be called by my real name: Joel. I am 13 years old, soon to be 14 and this is the first writing ...