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Re: My Heart Tightens
First, I'd like to thank you for reviewing. It means so much to me. Yes, I see how I need to improve on my word choice. I have the hardest ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
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It was nice, but I feel as it was cut short or was too fast paced. Also, some questions were running through my mind. If he was a screenwriter, what ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: My Heart Tightens
Sorry, I just realized a paragraph was accidentally entered halfway through somehow. Ignore the inconvienience.
Oct 16, 2011
