Hollow

I finally decided to uploud a drawing of mine. I'd like to get some feedback on one of mine, so enjoy! Also, the shading didn't really come out good because ...

Very nice! I absolutely love to draw too, so it's nice to see someone with the same interests as me. First off, congratulations on the nose! I have the toughest ...

Hi there! Your story seemed interesting, but left me so confused. Let's start from the beginning. Sitting by his lonesome, he's propped before a vase. Lonesome what? Lonesome isn't a ...

Story taken off for personal reasons.

Trying my best to make a creepy little story, I wrote this in the spirit of Halloween. Sorry if it's not very good. I'm not the best at these types ...

It was okay for my taste, but I feel as if it was a little dull. Also, I found one word that was a little awkward: “Children, come quickly! The ...

I like it, but I'm a little confused about the feel. At the beginning, it feels as if the narrator the narrator is scolding for what you've done, but at ...

I liked the feel of this poem very much. It seemed regretful in a way, although I'm confused on what it's about. I think that's just me because I've always ...

That was great! I love the eerie feeling it gave with the descriptions of this man and with him only being a mile away. I also like how vividly you ...

Story taken off for personal reasons.

First, I'd like to thank you for reviewing. It means so much to me. Yes, I see how I need to improve on my word choice. I have the hardest ...

I just like background in writings. Some people might think differently. I just think it adds to the personality of the character, but I may be wrong. I hope you ...

It was nice, but I feel as it was cut short or was too fast paced. Also, some questions were running through my mind. If he was a screenwriter, what ...

Sorry, I just realized a paragraph was accidentally entered halfway through somehow. Ignore the inconvienience.

Story taken off for personal reasons.