HollieWood

*alright here is my revised chapter one..i"ve started the story a few days earlier in the characters lives and slightly changed the setting* ___________________________________________________________

[Leah] She rolled over on the carpeted floor and sat up. She could smell something..food. It smelled good. She used her walking stick to help her stand up. "You're awake?" ...

[Leah] She was in a room by herself, holding the only weapon she had ever had; her walking stick. She heard a rustle of noise behind her. She lifted her ...

[Leah] "I'll go!" She said standing from where she had been sitting and soaking up the conversation. She had simply phased through the whole escape. It had been easy, everyone ...

Can I call Gabriel or has he already been taken?? Name: Leah Alba age: 20 height: 5' 6" Hair: dark brown eyes: she is blind but they are a hazed ...

Can I join!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!

sorry about the punctuation errors! My keyboard buttons dont work sometimes! I will post the next chapter soon..hope you liked this one!

**hey I was just writing for my sis..RoryLegen..she couldn't get on tonight..sorry.. shoulda told you that before**

[Kaylee] Keylee looked around to see if Nikro had followed her. He hadn't, smart move. She was vary careful about not stepping in the mud as it would splash up ...

*Tell me what you think* Changed Chapter One: Bitten Three men crowded around him in the dark London alley way. He muttered something about not having any money. Buggar he ...

Yay I loved it! OMG! I love her sarcastic humor I am the same way! Haha I don't think anyone could have written it better I freakin love you for ...

J'aime! (I'm pretty sure that is how you say I like in french lol..must pay more attention) Good, keep writing..cause it left a good mental image but I was a ...

I really like the first one.. it is a way to look at the sun without hurting your eyes lol. I like the moose one because it is bloody hilarious. ...

Brilliant! I really really really like black and white photos...I don't know much about photography accept that I like it so I can't really critique stuff..but I love the first ...

no one of great importance ... lol