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The Handmaid's Tale by Margaret Atwood has to be the worst book ever. I'm reading it for English at the moment and I can't read any more than 10 pages ...

Chapter 2 & 3 done. There's some nice description happening in there, such as describing Xavier's wound. Yet there are some parts that don't have enough. You wanted me to ...

Thanks for your super helpful yet super nice review. :D

Thank you very very much. I'm so glad you were able to help me out. Thanks for the star by the way :D

Done chapter 1. As a general comment, I'd like to see a little more description. Not too much, because you'll lose the quick pace. This applies more to chapter 1 ...

I've only reviewed the prologue so far, but here it is anyway. I'll continue soon. I have an exam on friday so I may not get any more up until ...

Hi, could you please review these. It's a two part story so make sure you do them in that order. Thank you.

Sorry, but this is the end of this story for the moment. I really only intended to do it as a character study. I will be doing more, if you ...

Hi there. I won't be critiquing your writing style, because it's fine as far as I can tell. Instead hopefully I can help you understand the procedure they go through ...

Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for helping me to improve this piece. I'll pay particular attention to the part when the soldier is trying to tie James up on my ...

James knelt down in the undergrowth. The damp soil soaked into the knee of his trousers. Sibo silently crouched down beside him. He took her small, calloused hand in his, ...

Hello. I haven't read the previous 49 chapters (that's a lot), but I hope I can still help (even if that only means bumping this thread to the top of ...

Thanks all for your comments. I originally wrote this as a "snapshot" of a planned novel. Now that you mention it though, I may as well do another "snapshot" of ...

Hi. I haven't read the previous chapters, so forgive me if anything I say wouldn't apply had I read from the beggining. First of all, it was good how you ...

You seem to have style nailed down. It flowed well and was easy to follow. Spelling and grammar were good too. I couldn't find much that needs changing - a ...