-
Re: Turning the Knives 1
The engine died, leaving only the sound of rain. Michael minimised the screen on his laptop and stood up. He walked through the lounge room, and onto the veranda to ...
Aug 2, 2009 -
Re: Does Anyone know how to speak German fluently?
Nine :smt046
Aug 2, 2009 -
Re: Boys wearing trousers around ankles or bums
I never did that, but I remember a couple of years back there were lots of people doing that at my school. Definently a teen insecurity issue - wanting to ...
Aug 2, 2009 -
Re: a prologue of my first story
Welcome to YWS. Here's your first review. The program was meant to make our soldiers better,stronger,smarter,and even more deadly. The concept of this first sentence is good because it raises ...
Aug 1, 2009 -
Re: Xavier's Quest
Rejoice, for I have returned etc. There wasn't any big problems with chapter 11. Just some small corrections. Watch the dashes too. There are way too many. I didn't read ...
Jul 26, 2009 -
Re: Meredith and the Ghost of Bronte's Camel
A hole smashed open in the floor of the helicopter. It rocked violently. “Well jiggle my jellybeans,” said Barbara, frantically grabbing hold of the seat. “What hit us?” said Meredith, ...
Jul 8, 2009 -
Re: Xavier's Quest
Final installment before I go away. I shall return on the 25th of July. (Although I may not post for a few days because I'll be unpacking and catching up ...
Jun 19, 2009 -
Re: Specific/Density Impulse
Thanks. Now that I know the units for specific impulse I could find out the rate of fuel consumption which is what I needed.
Jun 17, 2009 -
Re: Xavier's Quest
Here. Sorry I didn't get any done yesterday. Lots of homework. :cry: I'll be going on holiday on Saturday, and won't be back until the 25th of July, so don't ...
Jun 16, 2009 -
Re: Specific/Density Impulse
I have to do a physics report on a manned mission to Mars. It involves choosing fuel types for the ship. I've narrowed it down to liquid hydrogen or hydrazine. ...
Jun 16, 2009 -
Re: Loss - Part 1
Thank you kindly. I want to know the past. (Perhaps coming in later chapters?) Coming in earlier chapters actually. I cut in halfway through a planned novel to write this ...
Jun 14, 2009 -
Re: Xavier's Quest
And as for the good luck finding the stone... it's not THAT good of luck. Heh heh heh... So it turns out. Chapters 6, 7 and 8 were very well ...
Jun 14, 2009 -
Re: Loss - Part 1
Edited :D
Jun 13, 2009 -
Re: Loss - Part 2
Edited :D
Jun 13, 2009 -
Re: Xavier's Quest
Bridge To Terabihia syndrome is a term I made up. It means where the fantasy world is so stupid you just go "yeah right." I found the movie laughably immature. ...
Jun 13, 2009
