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I think this could do with a little more description. What does the inside of the dark wing look like? What's the kids spy academy look like? etc. Also a ...

Looks like the nitpicks have already been done, so I'll just tell you my general impression. Firstly, I think you need to be more clear about the Black Wing. At ...

Brilliant idea!

I live life outside of the norm. I am quite unpredictable, and do really stupid things like rolling in wet grass in the rain, or making rude jokes/comments at the ...

"Sorry I'm tardy. I was constipated." Wish I could have been there. :lol: Today I was playing pictionary in the library. We had really rude team names, and it was ...

I agree with you Matt. Last novel I tried to write was only just 50 000 words, and I was hoping for more like 100 000. The one I'm writing ...

If you want to get someone to follow your story as you post more chapters, do what I'm doing. Find someone else who's just starting to post chapters of their ...

Pink Floyd, The Wall , followed closely by The Tea Party, Tangents .

First customer here. Could you look at my action/adventure, Turning The Knives . Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Thanks man.

Today I ran around in the rain at recess and got soaking wet. Then In chemistry I hung up my socks and t-shirt in front of the heater to dry.

Yeah, I know what it's like starting novels and not finishing. I'm determined to finish my current one. So, are you working on a novel at the moment? I can ...

Hey. We don't have a lot in common. I don't like soccor but I do like golf. I like cafeteria food (although it's called the tuck shop where I live). ...

In Physics today I was absent mindedly chewing on my pen and accidentally sucked ink into my mouth. Half an hour later, I was still in physics, but I'd gone ...

Chapter 15 was good. It was cute how Lily and Xavier cuddled up to keep warm. Good foreshadowing with the Dracien army coming to attack. It looks like they're going ...

Hello Friend. The suspense is mounting! Couple of things. “What are you doing, Lee,” Question mark after Lee. “I’ll be writing that essay for History you’ve made us write,” Marcus ...