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I'm hoping to be a full time writer. I don't have any plans to go to uni though. My granny is a writer, and her editor has looked at some ...

This is excellent writing. Although the characters do seem slightly generic, you more than make up for that with setting and atmosphere. The pacing was just right too. I'm sure ...

I thought Call of Duty 4 had a really good storyline. And even though it's pretty much illegal, I don't like Zelda. (Please don't kill me in my sleep and ...

Every coming generation brings along hope to make the world a better place and to get rid of poverty once and for all in vain. This doesn't make sense. I ...

I do like the setting of WW1 trenches. From what I've seen in movies and read, it was a terrible place to be. What I don't like so much, is ...

Michael’s tires screeched as he rounded the corner and hit bitumen. The stereo was up on full. That moment of joy at his family’s survival was swallowed up by fear ...

Only after the last tree has been cut down Only after the last river has been poisoned Only after the last fish has been caught Only then you will find ...

I think you've got a great scene here. Apart from going over it for sentence structure (you missed a few words in some places), I think some more description would ...

I've already said The Handmaid's Tale, but I just read something nearly as bad. It was Area 7 by Matthew Reilly. If you want to know how bad it is, ...

The plot thickens! Another great chapter. I like this idea of "controlled reincarnation" and look forward to seing where it takes them. “Yes, I do. Well, not all of it, ...

I found this free personality test. Try it on yourself, try it on your characters. Supposedly there's 16 personality types, based on the combinations of four different aspects. These aspects ...

Hello again. Thanks for your reviews. Lets see if I can help you out as well. Let's start with characters. I'd like to see some more individuality between Kevin and ...

I'm loving the characters here, especially Thomas, and Lola is highly intriguing. Her being an albino is a great, unique touch. The description of the proffessor at the start is ...

This is fantastic! I wanted to give you a review, since you gave me one, but there isn't anything to change. I guess I could do a few nitpicks. He ...

Michael turned to see a narrow, powerful spotlight beam lancing down towards him from the dam wall. “Get down,” came Nigel’s shout. Michael instinctively leapt to the floor, moments before ...