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Well it's been 2 full days since the possum and the cheese incident and I haven't developed any strange diseases. I love you guys.

I went camping with some friends and a possum came into our campsite. It jumped onto my friend's lap, so I grabbed a handful of cheese and held it out ...

I went to the shop to buy vegetables, except they only had very small capsicums (that's peppers to you Americans). My friend Sky was working at the checkout and I ...

A good premise is that a character has a problem in their day to day life. Then something comes up, posing another problem (the main story problem). By solving the ...

Thanks. It seems like I need to clear some things up. Valeska's 25 and her brothers are 18, 17 and 16, which is why she's the leader. The bit where ...

Skins, your brother sounds like Chicken Joe off Surf's Up, who is played by Jon Heder, therefore making your brother equally as awesome as Napoleon Dynamite. Unless your brother was ...

I had a dream I was having a game of tennis with my brother, only we were using a basketball and we couldn't hit it hard enough to get it ...

I changed spouse to partner. I didn't add "are you single?" because I think the way a single person reacts to someone assuming them to be attatched will tell you ...

Think of each moment in your story as a nexus in time from which infinite pathways could unfold. Explore these pathways before deciding which one to take. Don't just take ...

NaNoWriMo is actually only 50, 000 words. Probably just a typo. Meditation is good, but I find the lotus position to be quite uncomfortable. Anyway, I'm sure if you're a ...

Thanks guys. I have no plans to write a next part though. It's a short story.

Hi there. I said I'd review this so here I am. I have to admit, my alarm bells went off on the first paragraph. The mistake you make here is ...

Try making the new character and one of the old characters have a disagreement. Show it from both of their perspectives, and make the new character right, and the old ...

Like the idea, but this really isn't the best way to start off. It's a big info dump, and you haven't established a relationship between reader and main character. That ...

As always your writing is wonderful to read. You've also come quite a way in credibility too, becasue I didn't see any of those unrealistic reactions like in the early ...