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Don't worry yourself with character appearances so much (shallow characterisation makes for a shallow story). Instead, focus on backstory. Where did they grow up? What sort of family background did ...

Just before sunrise. Very tidy, spacious desk. Fast music. Internet turned off. Dark chocolate on standby.

Having A Handmaid's Tale (I'll never get those hours of my life back) labeled as Sci-Fi would be an insult to all the proper Sci-Fi writers out there.

Wow, that would be awesome. No asking me twice. Loved ones dying would be hard, but you'd get used to it. By the time you've experienced all you want to ...

Whoops, I forgot to RSVP but I still did 19 reviews and got to number 1 :elephant: I'm ready to drop. G'night. And don't overtake me while I'm sleeping, becasue ...

I'm not much of a poetry reader, but I enjoyed this. It had a humour to it that was refreshing amongst the slough of dark, moody poetry out there. At ...

Nice article. I'd suggest you get rid of the big text and colours because it makes it seem like you're trying too hard to get the point across. If the ...

I didn't find the character very satisfying because of the way his views changed so quickly. One moment he's saying Scratch that. They’re Christadelphians. That’s like Christian but with much ...

Napalmerski makes a good point. However, in my quest to get the most reviews today, I read some pieces longer than this with no conflict, so kudos for that. Conflict ...

I don't often get writers block, and when I do, I can usually break it with some freewriting. My biggest dilema is in the editing phase. Often I find that ...

Looks like most of the critiquing has been done here. They only left me one thing to say :cry: That thing is that at the start I got the impression ...

I liked the names of the wolves. They're original as far as I know. As Lydia said, it's hard to critique much on something this short. One thing I will ...

Hello again. I've done 11 reviews today and am feeling particularly caustic, so brace yourself. I had a very fuzzy idea of what was going on here. I know it ...

After reading the prologue I was expecting a fast paced thriller. As such this chapter was a little dissapointing, because there wasn't any action, and it started with a huge ...

I must say, it's not often I see such a good piece here. Your prose is excellent. Not once did I skim or drift off or even feel slightly bored. ...