HikariMocha

peanut19 basically just pinpointed all the mistakes- but other then that- i find these lyrics very beautiful. Anyone can relate to this if they had one had a unrequited love ...

i fell in love with this. very beautiful and touching. i loved how you portrayed how the bad and good colors kinda balance each other out. how each one of ...

simply beautiful. i love how you added the poetic device repetition into this- very well played. i feel this :] amazing poetry and writingg skills, you seem to have in ...

i. loved. it. it gave me a spooky, depressed vibe- simply beautiful . the way you put it into words are indescribable, keep up the good work! i would not ...

Bravo! Very well done :D i cant pick out a favorite part-- they were all too good! cant wait to read moree! and one thing i particularly loved about this ...

This poem is beautiful. I can tell your feelings and your hopes, and how they aren't real. It is a sort of bittersweet peice. There is happiness but at the ...

That's such a beautiful poem, the words fit together perfectly. The way you stare at me, with your hypnotizing eyes, I fall deeper and deeper in love with you. Is ...

Hello there and welcome I like this poem a lot. I think you did a pretty good job. The ending is just unexpected. Beautiful stuff hey. I really have nothing ...

Hello I'm LastPaladin and I'll be your reviewer. I'm going to first some advice here that could be be considered a poem should have more than sweetness, it should have ...

The laughs, The smiles, I cherish them all. I tuck them away, deep into my heart. I love the way, you ruffle my hair and hold me tight. I love ...