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There are typos! Correct them when you get up. :) If this letter, on the other hand, is intended for the girl of his dreams... well... it's really quite creepy! ...

Dear Reader,  Today I choose to confide in you one of my greatest sorrows and regrets. I have no one else to turn to, so the only person I can ...

Thanks for the insight and advice! I greatly appreciate it!

I was up late the other night, and all of this just kind of jumped out of me. Im not sure how much sense it makes, but it is what ...

This is what happens when you sit next to perverted people in spanish class: Puse- Congugated form of Poner (to put) Not to be naughty or anything, just saying.

I'd change "edge" and "You drive me crazy" and "abyss" because these are a little weak. Unlike Jas, I love these words in your poem. I think it's a personal ...

Amazing, I feel like the woman in my life just died before me after reading that :thud: . Keep up the good work and I really like the way you ...

Ok, so here is the story again with revisions- I get up every morning and work my way through long corridors flanked by large portraits and sculptures. I am the ...

Thanks! I find that a very helpful review.

Made my heart warm up. All I could visualize was warmth in my heart. Keep up the good work!

wow, your poem summerizes a massive swelling of emotion I had for a girl awhile back. It made me sit down and remember all those hours where I sat at ...

Well Done! I really like the way you use the nosebleed in the story. Im not sure what else to say about your story that hasn't already been covered, but ...

Rated 12+ (not sure if that's to high or not.) Shattered By Hayes Pierson Waking up to get out of bed I started my usual routine. I get dressed and ...