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Re: Dare or Dream?
Dare or Dream? Shouldn’t a man Dare to dream Dream to dare To do the craziest things? Shouldn’t a man Be afraid Of telling the one he really adores That ...
Mar 18, 2010 -
Re: Flash Of Insight
Hiadel, I can't quite figure out whether your constant use of narrative summary is deliberate or accidental. So I have a question for you - Is there a reason why ...
Mar 9, 2010 -
Re: Flash Of Insight
Enjoy!~hiadel I briefly went over grammer, but might have missed something. Flash Of Insight Sitting on my couch, I was reaching for the remote when this strange old white guy ...
Mar 9, 2010 -
Re: Castle Gladeheart
Thank you for all of the helpful pointers!
Mar 8, 2010 -
Re: Castle Gladeheart
It's not that violent but im giving it a 18 rating anyway. I checked for errors, but might have missed some. you can point those out but please focus on ...
Mar 5, 2010 -
Re: Rabbit, Rabbit, Rabbit!
Here and there my family brings back the game momentarily, but we haven't been dedicated to it since like 3 years ago. Its fun.
Feb 25, 2010 -
Re: The Cricket
I really liked this poem. I felt so peaceful reading through the lines. The only thing I can say is that i'm not sure whenever you say Chirp, Chirp. Chirp, ...
Feb 25, 2010 -
Re: Harriet's Crossing
Harriet’s Crossing Taking a step closer to the edge I looked over the side. Clouds covered the massive expanse that I gazed into, and there was nothing above me but ...
Feb 24, 2010 -
Re: Temporary Love
Loveless, Im so happy that I get to remark on your work after that nice comment you shot at me awhile back. I really liked the feel of the story. ...
Feb 23, 2010 -
Re: Discovering the Prophet
-I usually feel the need to write when I am either depressed, or angry...sadly I feel the need to write very often. -However, once I am finished writing, I feel ...
Feb 22, 2010 -
Re: In the world of dreams
Wow, that's the kinda review I like! This was kinda a good fantasy of mine, so I probably misstepped when I made her assume my name. I wasn't out just ...
Feb 18, 2010 -
Re: In the world of dreams
Sometimes after stressful days I come back home and go upstairs and drop everything and just write my heart out. The other day was one of those days, and after ...
Feb 18, 2010 -
Re: Rabbit, Rabbit, Rabbit!
HAAHAHAHAHAHAH! That is so funny. :smt031 Hey Hiadel, RABBIT RABBIT RABBIT! Gotcha! :D The Minister of High Hopes Its not the first of the month........
Feb 14, 2010 -
Re: where does everyone get there influences?
hmmmm...... I would have to say the magical random events in my life. Oh, and also the people I love! :wink:
Feb 13, 2010 -
Re: Blame it on the rain pt.1
I also really liked your story. The begining really drew me into it and I liked how at the start you described thier relationship to one another. The whole part ...
Feb 13, 2010
