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Re: So Seductive
Yeah thanks for the comments, I really appreciate it!
Apr 19, 2010 -
Re: Imprisoned
I really liked the material that was covered in this piece but at the same time I feel like you are taking this story way too quickly. To me the ...
Apr 19, 2010 -
Re: All In The Eyes
All In The Eyes Enjoy!~Hiadel "Ok, I'll see you guys next week for the board meeting." I said to my colleagues as I packed my things away and made my ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Need help with a question! Please! Calling all Women!
Ok, so this is more of a question than a story, but here is the story behind the question: So in my english class there's this really cute girl that ...
Apr 10, 2010 -
Re: Is the short story dead?
I wouldn't really miss short stories if they did die... Sad Face :( Short Stories cry my name because I love cutting to the chase. I feel like when you ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: So Seductive
So Seductive By Hiadel Looking across the couch at his girlfriend Daniel took in all of her features. With a pretty smile, sparkling eyelashes, and lips that give angel’s a ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Forever
Cool. If you post other stuff up, pm me please!
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Forever
An interesting set of paragraphs. I really liked the descriptions because I could very easily set myself into the mood you were in when you started the transition into the ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: Bittersweet Summer (Previously Untitled) [pt.1]
I liked that a lot! Very interesting plot development. PM me when you finish put more stuff on it up! Other than that, keep it up :D
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: Martha's Baby
Martha’s Baby Hiadel Did I really need the money that badly? Rent was due in just a few days and I didn’t have anything. If I got the kids and ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: The Aroma
Thank you ever so much for the imput and what you all said. Thanks!
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: The Aroma
The Aroma- Hiadel Walking through the woods I still couldn’t understand how I had managed to get myself lost this morning. I must have been out in these woods a ...
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: The Man In The Machine
I'm not sure if there is enough fiction to classify this as fiction, but I knew that it was close enough. The Man In The Machine By Hiadel Riding up ...
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: When Love Goes Cold
Here is another strange story from me. Like always, I find myself awake at 1AM editing this to turn it in to YWS. I'm sorry if I missed anything in ...
Mar 21, 2010 -
Re: Dare or Dream?
Thanks so much! All that advice really helps and I really appreciate it!
Mar 18, 2010
