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Re: The Golden Rule
The Golden Rule Hiadel Sitting in my green velvet chair I absorbed the cottage that surrounded me. Fresh mountain air rolled in from the screen doors nearby and fell over ...
Jun 24, 2010 -
Re: The Boner
The Boner By Hiadel ~Enjoy! A hard sound cracked across the stale room. It vibrated and loosened the air around it, and immediately upset the natural balance that exists in ...
Jun 15, 2010 -
Re: Forgetting (Edited)
I liked this! Yeah you should totally go for writing the next part(s). I really enjoyed the whole mirror paragraph because I'm really big on eyes. (Girls and pretty eyes, ...
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: Romel
It has been awhile since my last post online, but I still think the quality is there. Enjoy ~ Hiadel Romel Two black brothers sat on a window talking about ...
Jun 5, 2010 -
Re: Never Ending Land
A quick short that I thought of Hiadel The room I'm standing in is barely a room. It forms a tight square around me and surrounds me with red and ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: Old Desires
Ok, eddited grammer mistakes aside, what did u guys think of the general plot/buildup/ending?
May 8, 2010 -
Re: Old Desires
I honestly don't know what to say about this story, other than that I hope you enjoy it. Hiadel Looking out the window I saw the storm that was raging ...
May 8, 2010 -
Re: Butterfly Kiss
That was soooooooo cute. I liked how you described the kiss and how high you seemed to get off of it. The only problem I had with your piece was ...
May 7, 2010 -
Re: So Seductive
Thanks for all the comments. I really appreciate it!
May 6, 2010 -
Re: Guitarist Of Guiltoro
I hope you guys enjoyed this as much as I enjoyed writing it! Guitarist Of Giltoro Hiadel Walking down the side of a boardwalk a business man admired the coastline. ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: An Affinity with Love
First thought after reading this was one big puppy dog face :elephant: :elephant: I only put elephants because I couldn't find anything that seemed doggy enough. That's not the point ...
May 1, 2010 -
Re: So Seductive
When I was writing this piece I intentionally went out on a limb and tried to toy with people's views of romance and how things in this arena work out. ...
May 1, 2010 -
Re: Living With Pigs
Living with pigs Hiadel Slipping through the dark moonlit hallways Lazaro listened for noise. There wasn't any. Good, he thought, there won't be anything to hold me up tonight. White ...
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: The Moon And All The Stars
I've never read any of the twilight saga (and I don't plan on reading it in the future.). Can a man honestly write a story involving a werewolf without it ...
Apr 20, 2010 -
Re: The Moon And All The Stars
Enjoy! The Moon And All The Stars Hiadel I was looking up at the night’s sky when my lover asked me “Why do you love me?”. Looking back at her ...
Apr 20, 2010
