Hiadel

Conventions of an Innocent toilet By Hiadel, aka Hayes The Hayes Draft 2 Dear Officer Rodney, If people honestly think that they are innocent of a crime does that make ...

I'm not sure I want to keep this title of "Patio"; By Hiadel, HayesTheHayes Come out to the light I swear we will not fight There on the patio Smoking ...

Fire and Ice By Hiadel, aka "Hayes The Hayes" Draft 2 Dear Steve, It feels like it has been a long time; almost forever. I miss my brother and uncle ...

Hey, I really liked how the tone fit well with the tempo of the story going from this woman being a human and slowly over time transforming into a wolf. ...

Great short. I loved how you refereed to Voldemort as "Voldie".

Hey, I really liked how you handled your random topic. Your first paragraph was based on a more serious poetic feel, then you foiled it with the rest of your ...

I updated it to my current 4th draft. Thanks for the reviews so far, I'm happy with how this piece is working out.

The listing w/o commas is totally intentional. That is all. Eyes open in the shadows. They look around, explore the universe of the room they are in. Wardrobe chest chair ...

Richard looked across the room at his boss. A small round light bulb was the only thing giving the area life. The little brightness it provided illuminated the small warehouse ...

The House of the Mind By Hiadel The Appalachian mountains sat in the distance as sergeant Mills drove his cop car. His wheels worked hard at climbing the steep grade ...

Popular Violence Hiadel Standing on Ann Marie’s front porch I looked at her pretty face. A carefully crafted curve on her cheek matched with a delicate nose and mouth. A ...

Croaking Hiadel “Those flies tasted like shit” a deep voice said as he polished the small silver gun that he held in his hands. Folding away the rag he put ...

Thanks for the reviews!

Thanks so much for the amazing feedback! I really appreciate it all so far!

Hey guys this is the first 1/3 of the story, so tell me what you think so far. I already have the whole storyline set up, but I would like ...