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Hetzie

  • Other Poetry Re: Deleted

    Very good, I am liking very much :D Unusual structure but I think that makes it stand out more so, and place the emphasis on the whole forbidden. Keep it ...

    Nov 29, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: Latin Lover

    Latin Lover Moonlight entwined on naked skin, Full of passion, full to the brim, Teasing gestures from big brown eyes, Night time shattered by climatic cries. Fingers explore every curve ...

    Nov 29, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: Seduction

    Mods feel free to move this if its too graphic... ------- Seduction. Enticing words roll gently from luscious lips. Formations by hand are presented as scripts. Permeating the mind with ...

    Nov 27, 2007
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello, Bonjour, Ola, Yasou to you all

    Hi all, I've been on here for about 2 days, and now I think its time for an introduction...I'm Hetzie and since I've been writing for a few years, I ...

    Nov 25, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Life

    It doesnt matter if its to abstract and obsolete, I think thats what makes it a good poem (in my opinion). 'It choses who to favor It chooses who to ...

    Nov 24, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Shadow of the Heart

    I like it :) i like the way you described the movements of Darkness, to the point but still holds its mystery. Maybe try a little rhyming? is might help ...

    Nov 24, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Listener

    The Listener With the sound of a teardrop falling, The Listener rides the skies, With whispers gathered into his soul, And eternity in his eyes. He rides a coach of ...

    Nov 24, 2007


A person is more than their experiences, stacked up like stones... Our best moments are the foundations we use to reach for the sky.
— Yumi and the Nightmare Painter by Brandon Sanderson