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Re: Deleted
Very good, I am liking very much :D Unusual structure but I think that makes it stand out more so, and place the emphasis on the whole forbidden. Keep it ...
Nov 29, 2007 -
Re: Latin Lover
Latin Lover Moonlight entwined on naked skin, Full of passion, full to the brim, Teasing gestures from big brown eyes, Night time shattered by climatic cries. Fingers explore every curve ...
Nov 29, 2007 -
Re: Seduction
Mods feel free to move this if its too graphic... ------- Seduction. Enticing words roll gently from luscious lips. Formations by hand are presented as scripts. Permeating the mind with ...
Nov 27, 2007 -
Re: Hello, Bonjour, Ola, Yasou to you all
Hi all, I've been on here for about 2 days, and now I think its time for an introduction...I'm Hetzie and since I've been writing for a few years, I ...
Nov 25, 2007 -
Re: Life
It doesnt matter if its to abstract and obsolete, I think thats what makes it a good poem (in my opinion). 'It choses who to favor It chooses who to ...
Nov 24, 2007 -
Re: Shadow of the Heart
I like it :) i like the way you described the movements of Darkness, to the point but still holds its mystery. Maybe try a little rhyming? is might help ...
Nov 24, 2007 -
Re: The Listener
The Listener With the sound of a teardrop falling, The Listener rides the skies, With whispers gathered into his soul, And eternity in his eyes. He rides a coach of ...
Nov 24, 2007
