Hermes

I'm reading Valient by Holly Black. I read Tithe and I think it's pretty wicked.

Thanks for the critique. On the first one: I had no idea what to write for the poem so I stuck to the format that the example came in. I'm ...

So I haven't posted anything in like, months. I have three poems, and they're a lot longer than my previous ones because, well, I'm like that. So here's three poems ...

I love italian FOOD! Welcome to the forums, nice to meet you!

V The office of Clancy Livingston was a large, modern themed room with a great bay window looking out over the Divix training grounds. The president of Divix reclined in ...

IV Ezra and Derek sat in silence in the cold locker room as they changed from their uniforms. The room seemed darker and more metallic to Ezra as he pulled ...

III Salt water and spray splashed upon the researchers out on pier forty-three. The man in the yellow slicker slipped into the safe-house, shaking the stinging water from his eyes. ...

As he walked off into the sunset, the sun went supernova, and the world exploded into firey ash. Those poor, poor people.

I feel your pain. Finishing things is like a phobia. I sometimes don't even finish books I'm reading. XD. I have to agree with Snoink and WD. What you have ...

Agreed, the first is amazing. I love the lighting and how vibrant the graffiti looks. Same goes for the third. The flash in the corners is really cool.

Things I Liked: It's got a lot of potential to be an intreguing story and I love sci-fi so your concepts are cool. Comments: The names, however, are a little ...

Cute avatar. Welcome to the forums!

I love green, and I loved The Monsters of Morley Manor. Favorite film? I really loved 300 and V for Vendetta, but there are so many.

Thanks for the comments, PN! I updated the prologue and shifted one of the paragraphs in chapter one. I think the grammar issue was fixed as well. Chapter two, hot ...

This isn't my first attempt at a novel, but it's probably my most serious one. I'd love to post the outline but knowing the ending ruins the biggest plot twist ...