Henry

Alright, thanks I will take the advice for future stories and a possible future draft. I guess knowing the genre really changes a lot!

I would like you to review my story. But first I would like to let you know a few thing: 1) It is meant to be funny near the beginning ...

I do read a lot, but one thing you have to understand is, this isn't supposed to be super realistic. It's supposed to be a comedy that turned into a ...

AH! I liked it, but one thing is killing me! The end! It just stops, and I scrolled frantically up and down looking for more. Why must you leave it ...

It seems to me that you are just going for total randomness. I get the feeling that you think that constitutes a rip-roaring, laugh riot. The story could go into ...

Have you ever read the book "Darkly Dreaming Dexter"? It is very similar, he has a blood lust and to quench it he kills people, but only criminals and people ...

This is a story that I decided to write inspired by me and a friend. We were talking about what we would name our child, when and if we had ...

I concur with Wang Chun and gamechanger, The ending area was bad because it was one of those deus ex machina's that writers use all too much. Just a quick ...

Isn't this supposed to be, Non-Fiction? Or is this what you interpret while you were fast asleep, or passed out? It's rather hard to follow because quite obviously, rats can't ...

I'm gonna have to interject here and say, this sucks. It really makes no sense, no story, kinda just making rhymes that don't really rhyme, Eh? It really doesn't seem ...

I'm gonna have to interject here and say, this sucks. It really makes no sense, no story, kinda just making rhymes that don't really rhyme, Eh? It really doesn't seem ...