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  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Jacob is dead--fpotp concept chapter

    Hi! Thanks for the review! This is still a 1st draft and the only things I’ve fixed were the typos but I’ll try to get it to flow freely once ...

    Jul 16
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Realistic Re: Flowers Printed on the Page

    oh wait, also this part: "I am completely able-bodied and my mental disabilities are inconvenient at worst." ik right now it seems like telling not showing but it's more like ...

    Jul 13
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Jacob is dead--fpotp concept chapter

    hii! thanks for the review! I'll get to more pressing issues later but I just wanna clarify Hanna is Jacob's girlfriend and was introduced in chapter 5 of Flowers Printed ...

    Jul 13
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Realistic Re: Flowers Printed on the Page

    tyyy for the review! I've had ppl beta read these chapters before but they mostly just pointed out typos or pacing inconsistencies--yk the stuff easily fixed with a quick skim ...

    Jul 11
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Realistic Re: Flowers Printed on the Page

    no i use campfire edit: why'd it post twice?

    Jul 5
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Realistic Re: Flowers Printed on the Page

    no i use campfire

    Jul 5
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Realistic Re: Flowers Printed on the Page

    ok first of all, DAMMIT I EXPORTED THEM WRONG! my software lets you export multiple files at once I just thought it would go in order from up to down ...

    Jul 5


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