HelloKittyFreak777

It's beautiful. Beautiful, sad, deep, and well written. You did a superb job. Although I am obligated, as an honest person, to tell you that you are not completely consistent ...

Introduction It probably wasn't the smartest thing I've ever done. I should've waited for him to slow down. But all I knew was that I had to get away from ...

I loved the first paragraph! It was an awesome introduction. But some bits were choppy. Try developing a better flow. Otherwise a 7/10 Good job

ROFL! I literally laughed out loud! I love how Charlie is such an a-ahole to Bella! Especially at her wedding! Because nothing says fatherly love like verbal abuse! :) "Gosh ...

I love this poem! it is charged with emotion. You can sympathize with the speaker's sense of shame and fear of her parent's reaction. Full of woe, self pity, and ...