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Re: Bright
Part of it confused me, "Living in the world of misery. Heaven may bring me none of that," What does heaven bring none of? Oh and in the beginning "my ...
Apr 17, 2007 -
Re: Untitled
It's good. I was wondering why you divide it into sections. It kind of breaks up the poem. The ending is good too. If you're going to break it into ...
Apr 17, 2007