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Part of it confused me, "Living in the world of misery. Heaven may bring me none of that," What does heaven bring none of? Oh and in the beginning "my ...

Tina, I had no idea you were such a good poet. I disagree with Brad, and I think maybe the first stanza is a little, hmm what to call it, ...

It's good. I was wondering why you divide it into sections. It kind of breaks up the poem. The ending is good too. If you're going to break it into ...

Thanks for that. And I get what your saying. I prefer reading poetry than writing but every once in a while i take a crack at it. So all the ...

Was it Worth It? with every beat i wince from the pain tears cant describe the unimaginable sorrow to sit and stare at the girl of your dreams but thats ...

he fell down she offered a hand he hit the ground she helped him stand she asked if he was ok all he did was shrug she knew he wasnt ...

Should I? it gives us a view of what's out there but no one knows untill they venture beyond beyong its wooden panes and plates of glass there is a ...

Hey guys. Im richard. or Chi thanks to Roya. I just made my account. I havn't even had time to post anything yet. I'll get on that. So yup, I'm ...