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Re: Zombies!
Hecatia sighed melodramatically. She’d only just found the group she was looking for and now they had all split up. Luckily for her, all the zombies seemed to have followed ...
Oct 10, 2011 -
Re: Zombies!
Somewhere else in YWS... Hecatia could (figuratively) have slapped herself for choosing to turn left towards Poetry rather than right towards Short Stories & Novels. Diving to the side as ...
Oct 10, 2011 -
Re: The Darkness Engulfs Me
This is very good. The imagery is wonderful and the reader is provided with a real sense of the emotions involved. There are very few things to say, however, the ...
Oct 8, 2011 -
Re: The Boy who was very wise
A Brothers Grimm etc styled fairy-tale/ story-with-a-moral I wrote for fun after reading the wonderful 'Enchantress form the stars' By Sylvia Engdahl. A good bit of styling practice too :) ...
Oct 8, 2011 -
Re: Zombies!
Elsewhere... Hecatia gradually stirred from what seemed like a year-long sleep, blearily opening her eyes to the Chamber of Forgotten Profiles. The chamber was dusty, the walls cracked and Hecatia ...
Oct 6, 2011 -
Re: It's Almost Like Winning
This is another great song! I adore the chorus, 5 stars! I agree that this verse changes the flow of the song a bit; I don’t even hate you and ...
Aug 14, 2010 -
Re: I accidentally started caring
There are some great lyrics here! I'd love to hear the music that would go with them! Lyrics like these: - Now I’m thinking to myself “You’re a fool, look ...
Aug 14, 2010 -
Re: Gothic Tale
Thank you for writing such a detailed and helpful review! 1) Yes, I definitely need a better title.... I shall work on that. 2) Thanks! ^_^ 3) You're right, That ...
Aug 13, 2010 -
Re: Gothic Tale
This is a Gothic Story I wrote for an assignment in year 10. Please keep in mind that we were supposed to be writing in the old gothic style. Enjoy....? ...
Aug 13, 2010
