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Hey, I'm Stela and I'll be reviewing for you today :) Green eyes staring at me, his face mere inches apart, begging me, pleading me, to reach out and touch ...

Hey there! I'm here to review chapter 3 for you (obviously) ! But anyway, let's start with the nitpicks: I could tell he was hurrying me to hang up I ...

Hey! I'm Stela, and I reviewed part of this yesterday, so I thought I'd do this one too, since it's out now. It's actually really interesting. It's caught my attention. ...

Hello there! I will be reviewing for you today :) First of all, this is a lovely story. It was one of the few stories I read today on this ...

Hello! I would just like to say that this is TOO much like the Vampire Academy. Just, too much. So much in fact, that it could possibly be considered copyright ...

Hey! I'm Stela and I'll be reviewing for you today. [Next , he tried to reach the end of the silver mist that surrounded him[/quote] I believe there should be ...

My name is Stela, and I will be reviewing for you today. Right, nitpicks. provided a better answer to the unexplainable then ( than ) any of the adults around ...

Okay, so I reviewed your first chapter, and thought I'd do the second one as well. And oh boy, oh boy isn't there a plot twist? Declan isn't the perfect ...

I have never had a boyfriend for real, and has never done ‘it’ Let's start with the nitpicks, first. My mum has never got me one gift that I could ...

Hello! I'm Stela and I'll be reviewing your work today. First off, WOW this is long. Ever thought of breaking it into chunks as to not intimidate us? :P Secondly, ...

Hey, I'm Stela and I'll be reviweing for you today. here on the dark, writhing ocean Should read 'in the dark, writhing ocean' as opposed to on. “Alice we’ll be ...

Hey, I really liked your speech. Here are just some things I thought you could change around a bit. In the cafeterias, according to my mother , pizza+milk= many trips ...

I'm sure there will be others that will be able to give you an extensive review of this (there's always one -.-) pointing out tons of things that could be ...

Hi :) I will not be analyzing your grammar and nit picking every mistake. I'll leave that to the Grammar Nazis. I thought I would point out though, that something ...

Hey! I'm Stela, and I'll be reviewing for you today. First off: Soooo Get rid of all the extra o's. It looks unproffesional and messy. Your life doesn’t have to ...