Heatherish

okay so, i made almost all of the corrections you suggested (thanks for those by the way, they were really good and im glad you caught them) i only left ...

wow...that was an incredible start...i am still confused on a lot of things but its nothing that cant be cleared up in the future...i urge you to continue writing...please?

YAY!! excited for your comments...the preface was the first thing i wrote (obv) and it was a little weak but i didnt know how to change it so im glad ...

ooooo i didnt realize there already WAS a chapter 1 woo hooo!! cant wait!!

o come on!! you have to at least have some ideas about where you want to take this story!!! thats how i write, i know my characters need to get ...

yea thats what i was thinking too *sigh* ill wait till tomorrow or the next day to put it up just wicked excited i have at lease ONE person who ...

yea i can see where those two statements could seem confusing....she doesnt feel much and they will explain it later on also i think i kind of reveal more of ...

um...i dont understand your question, maybe quote the part(s) you're talking about and i can explain or fix whatever it is. and THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH i love that YOU ...

wow ok thanks those are really good ideas *goes to edit* *back from editing* so i changed the first word, and i went back and added in what she experienced ...

i made some of the corrections you guys suggested...thanks for the help, i appreciate it!!!

oh man!!! i have no idea how to do that...i think ill just take your advice and post a chapter per thread...thanks!!!

actually i do have a story up...its just called "the preface to my new story" sometime today im putting up the first chaper and i would love to get your ...

billy-i would really like to thank you for all of your comments. however i wanted to ask your opinion on something...you said that i needed more spacing. when i first ...