Heatherish

again and again thank you!! i'm really glad that you are understanding my characters and feeling for them. its an authors dream. and you are on the PM list now ...

again, thank you so much for the review!! i love getting new readers! i defended myself against the ridiculous Twilight-cloning accusations. i am not normally one to defend my writing ...

thank for the review!!!! believe me i KNOW that i mess up with tenses in a lot of places. i apologized for that somewhere... anyway, i have a beta that ...

yeah you will get to hunting. when friends of mine read the microwaving-blood part, they were all like "EW". but really, if you think about it, what else would they ...

hahaha, no i'm 20 so i can pretty much read whatever i want. besides that i was reading Anne Rice when i was 14 and that can be quite racy ...

thank you, your review was very flattering, although i am quite a humble person, i think i felt my head inflate a few degrees...

I agree with you that a lot of my dialogue falls a bit flat. A lot of what you are reading is this story in its roughest draft. I am ...

interesting. I've never heard Nicholas been described as "sketchy" before. Actually, I get more complaints that I didn't develop Charlie enough. Again, interesting. I'm not defending my story in any ...

i understand what you mean. first of all, in a few chapters i have Charlie start to "feel" certain things. it may seem like they are falling fast but admitting ...

thank you very much for your review. i agree that giving vampires new qualities keeps it interesting and fun. i know many of the stereotypical vampire characteristics and chose to ...

i'm glad you both liked it. Diana is one of my favorite characters too. I'll put more up soon.

aww thank you so much. as a writer it feels great that others think i captured my characters' emotions well. it means a lot.

i know!!! i felt so BAD for Lukas, even though i am the author and the mastermind, it still hurt to see his feelings hurt like that. i still have ...

hey, thank you SOOO much for your critique. i'll hold on to your comments and definitely put them to good use when i go back through this story and start ...

alright i definitely will. and yeah, i havent had much time to read your story either, sorry about that. anyway, i saw that you have a bunch of threads on ...