HaydenMacaw

This poem is absolutly beautiful! This past years I've had some issues concerning my family that I've really been struggling with, and your poem really pinpointed how I feel somtimes. ...

Great Poem :) I'm not familliar with the Gilligan Island tune, though. I think its great that you heave a twist at the end. My one comment would be that ...

Excellent Poem! I find goverment and other social/cultural issues to be an excellent topic for literary inspiration. My one critique would be that the rythmic repitious tone, and the use ...