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*"my own version of Douglas Adams' writing style" is probably more accurate

so I'm going to be expecting some pretty great stuff by the time I get to your more recent writing. oh no hahah Yeah I was trying to somewhat simulate ...

Thnx 4 review. Is jarring bad? I assume it is but I don't really understand what you're saying there. "The order of things is out of order here. "He heard ...

I've personally gone through depression and I found this really disrespectful.

ah yeah the last paragraph you mentioned, i was gonna separate it like that but i'm really wary of short paragraphs because i used to write a lot of short ...

"I cannot find a single thing to fault with this chapter" and "Your level of detail, even within such a short segment of a chapter is amazing. " are so ...

Oh, yeah, some other people have asked about Bellatrix being taken from Harry Potter, but it's not inspired by that at all - I actually named all the Orion fellas ...

Oh god at first I thought you were being sarcastic, but when I figured that you probably weren't, this review made me smile. Thank yew. I was actually particularly worried ...

Yeaaah, I'm really bad with the dialogue stuff. Been told I include too much of it. Tags too. Blaah and that recap thingy felt awkward but I forgot to proofread ...

i meant that, in this world i've made, the zombie activity might happen from time to time, hence "reanimated and crawling out of the pier" nothing's gonna get cleared up ...

oh I thought I'd removed the whole "littering wasn't cool, but the planet was" part. Dang ittt thanks for the tips and such. I didn't proofread this at all before ...

Oh, nope, sorry, the smoke is meant to be "it" and yeah, the whole thing feels pretty poorly written to me, but I didn't do much work editing. I had ...

rained down is because if it were to fall apart it wouldn't exactly plummet and all its parts would rain down so rain down radioed up, yes, radios, exactly what ...

*a year, and wow, sorry about that going through three times, my internet is lagging like, well, hell. hah