Hattable

Totally not planning another story featuring these characters, possibly a prequel. *cough*

Thank you. XD

I thought it was explained well enough. I'll try looking it over again, possibly, and fix it if I can.

Hey, thanks for the review! :D This will definitely remind you of TiMER (never seen it, let me explain) because that's sort of the prompt we had for the tournament ...

You're making this a lot more complicated than it was meant to be, Jen. >.< They just disappeared, stopped haunting the place. They finished whatever business was keeping them partly ...

*cough* The ending where he says they've gone is a time after the previous paragraphs. If that makes sense...

The dog and grandma were dead. They're ghosts. That's why the paw prints shouldn't be there and the grandma calling in the morning is creepy. :P

Also, here, I'm pretty sure you meant "hear her", not "her her". i wanted to her her answer

Yeah, "silence" is used so much throughout this novel that I'm running out of ways to switch it up and not just say "silence fell" or "silence reigned". As for ...

Hey Falco, Yeah, I tried "slingshotted" but spellcheck didn't like it. >.> XD Eh, I'll change it back anyway. Glad you're liking it so far!

Thanks for the amazing review, Jen. xD I'll explain a couple of things. Like the arm on the can... It's a robotic arm thing that comes out of the side ...

No... It was a reference to the Wizard of Oz. XD Dorothy is just a nickname for the armored figure, until they learn his real name. Tin Man was part ...

I mean, just before and after it I clarified that it was the next day... >.>

*have to rewrite my darn reply 'cause my internet sucks* So many quotes. o.o No, the can was not a reference to Hitchhiker's, but this whole story/novel thing is inspired ...

Thanks! This just popped into my head out of no where and I had to get it down as fast as I could. XD I'll definitely work on showing, though. ...