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Re: The Alchemist's Bookshop [Part 2]
Yo, Adri! Excited to be reading the second part to this story! Gonna hop right into things because I write reviews backwards (openings last) and it's already super long, I ...
May 14, 2018 -
Re: The Charm of Deception - Chapter 14
Heya. Badabing, badaboom, got another review for you. Rana gaped as she stared down at the man, suddenly recognizing him. His voice, his obviously rehearsed line, his cocky swagger — ...
May 12, 2018 -
Re: The Charm of Deception - Chapter 13
Heyo, heya, gonna leap right in-- The night was nearly as long as the one she spent in the dungeon. Rana didn’t breathe easily until she was back in her ...
May 12, 2018 -
Re: The Charm of Deception - Chapter 12
Heya. Openings are seriously so difficult, haha. I'm just gonna get going-- She stood and pinned her cloak around her shoulders, then grabbed the small dagger that Denton gave her. ...
May 11, 2018 -
Re: The Charm of Deception - Chapter 11
Another chapter, another review! You’re being stupid, she reminded herself. Has she previously told herself she was being stupid? If not, reminded isn't exactly the best word for this. She ...
May 11, 2018 -
Re: The Charm of Deception - Chapter 10
Hi! Back again, hoping to get my helmet now. Original and fresh openings are difficult. Let's get going, yeah? “Let go of me!” Rana snarled, yanking on her arm in ...
May 10, 2018 -
Re: The Charm of Deception - Chapter 9
Hiya! These beginnings are pretty short, huh? I don't wanna push the character count any further with aimless notes here, though. I do all my content comments at the end. ...
May 10, 2018 -
Re: The Charm of Deception - Chapter 8
Heya, review time! Gonna hop right into things. Eventually, she worked up the courage to go to his section on war books. “His” obviously refers to Prince Synakrein, as it's ...
May 10, 2018 -
Re: The Charm of Deception - Chapter 7
Heyo! Trying to get to these while they're still in the Green Room 'cause I need my KoTGR shield and whatnot. Here we go! She gratefully walked into the room ...
May 10, 2018 -
Re: Insecta - A Gothic Short Story
Hey, there! I'm gonna focus mostly on grammar, then try to get some comments on general content in at the end. Let's go! We lay in peace underneath the late ...
May 7, 2018 -
Re: The Alchemist's Bookshop [Part 1]
Heya, Adri! I've been looking forward to this story, so I'm just gonna dive in and get to the content-type stuff at the end. You ready? Emelia gazed up from ...
May 7, 2018 -
Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 12.3)
Heya, scribbleinks! So I've been seeing/hearing about this novel around yewis, but haven't read any of it yet. I fully intend to go back and read from the start, if ...
May 6, 2018 -
Re: Time Out, Chapter 1
Heya, pinkrose. Gonna try and get that last review in here, for my KoTGR sword. How about it? While the rest of you is controlled by time and its constant ...
May 2, 2018 -
Re: The Charm of Deception - Chapter 6
Heya. Here again, trying to get my sword in KoTGR, and helping my team out a bit for RD. How're you doing? Looks like I've caught up, for now, dang. ...
Apr 29, 2018 -
Re: The Charm of Deception - Chapter 5
Heyo! Gonna hop right in, here. Rana said angrily, though her voice lacked some of the venom it had at breakfast. So, “had had” is a sin and I won't ...
Apr 29, 2018
