Harrug

Absolutely great! I loved the dialogue, the way you described what was happening, and the overall high-speed chase format of it. At the beginning, when someone yelled "MY CABBAGES," that ...

I forgot to add in my previous review that all of your explanations and vocabulary are great. I am already excited to see how Effy does by her self, out ...

I can see this is only the first part (as the title says), so I wouldn't expect to much to be given away at the beginning. Although I don't know ...

Although I'm not quite sure what you were going for, I kind of liked this piece in the sense of the way it was written. However, I didn't like it ...

Wow, this was a great piece of writing. I was hooked from the very beginning, and you did a great job of keeping me motivated to continue reading throughout the ...