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This piece flows very smoothly. Those last five lines were spectacular. I agree with the other reviewer--this is powerful and bold. I especially liked the "watching the dust cover my ...

Wow! :) Beautiful.

I'll have to rewrite. :lol: Thank you very much for your comments which I can see have a lot of truth. I suppose my writing is a little stiff. I ...

Sorry doll. ^_^ Can we kiss and make up? *kisses*

Claudette, was there ANYTHING AT ALL that you liked about my story?

Wow, I thought my worth as a writer was decent but now I'll have to rethink that along with the whole of my story. Oh well. :lol: I guess this ...

I suppose I was just rambling. XD

:(

I don't think anyone should have to explain what they've written. Don't you agree? That's why I hate criticism that isn't based on grammer or spelling issues. I see the ...

Sadness utterly my own Only I understand it But it’s possible even I don’t understand it Sadness without a name Alone in its shadowed mystery A Great Wall of misery ...

Beautfiul. Very dark. I certaintly liked it. :) "Do mirrors reflect the person you are, Or just the shell of what you want to be?" ^-^ My favorite part! It ...

Intellectuals Breaking new grounds Charting new territories Sailing open waters Testing set limits Boundaries set in stone broken A new and uncharted territory Filled with unique ideas and beliefs Out

A man stood facing me as I entered the little antiques shop. His seemingly black eyes moved directly to mine when the little bell on the top of the door ...

Pretty. :D

I suppose I can't please everyone. ;) *sighs*