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Re: Buckley and Rivers
Great work! Just a couple of grammar mistakes here and there as others have suggested. But keep up the good work
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Old Story
Good work Buddy. I thought it was a very dramatic ending and I think you could keep working on it I am very interested to see what happens next. Keep ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: One Country, Two Worlds [Part 1]
another thing that confused was the changing of characters early in the piece before the carriage scene. I don't quite understand that, it confused me who was who. But good ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: One Country, Two Worlds [Part 1]
It's excellent. Though some bits confuse me, I thought it was good. I was just a bit confused on some of the things that you put in there. Like: I ...
Jan 17, 2011