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Re: Things I Carry Inside Me
Actually, I really like that setup and totally understand the annoyance of the "I carry". Thanks everyone, I'll change it :smt003
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: Walking
This is different, but in a good way. I like your poem because I thought it was well put together and interesting. I could totally picture the whole "walk" and ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: If Roses Grew Where Petals Fall
I really love this poem!! I loved it at the funeral and I still love it now! Gram was such an extraordinary person that's for sure. You emphasized this in ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: Things I Carry Inside Me
Yeah, I understand what you both mean, thanks, but also this was for school a while back and I HAD to repeat the lines like that. All of the poems ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: A Body Shot
I thought this was great. The title caught my attention because it made me curious to know what your poem was about. All in all, the poem was great because ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: I Am A New Me
(An yet another old one. I just wanted to post a few things before I start writing again. Comments and ideas are always welcome. Thanks, Allison) I returned from this ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: Things I Carry Inside Me
(Here's another old one, but I thought I would post it anyway. As always comments, ideas, and critical criticism are welcome. Thanks, Allison) I carry the good and the bad ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: Deep Within
Thank you both for your ideas and opinions :) I will take them both into consideration. This is also something I didn't spent too much time on, but I can ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: Deep Within
(Here's another poem I wrote at the beginning of the year. I haven't written anything new for a while, but I will, soon. Feel free to leave any comments, ideas, ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: Dawn Reports 3
Ah yes, life is a very interesting topic! I could go on and on about this, but I won't. I too agree with you about letting "hate" and "grudges" go. ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: Socrates: An Epic Poem
Hey Dawn, Thanks so much for you comment. Socrates was an extraordinary person that's for sure! :smt003 I'll post some things soon, but no guarantees ;)
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: Socrates: An Epic Poem
(Well, here goes. My first writing post...) “The unexamined life is not worth living”, stated Socrates at his deathbed. Only a few who were inspired could understand his way of ...
Jun 21, 2010 -
Re: Hold on, Let go
I think this was well written; You gave the reader a picture from the Titanic, but also you set the mood. Very nice :) ~Allison
Jun 12, 2010