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Re: Originality, Personality, and Individuality
Hilariously, enough.. it probably isn't even original. I just based it off on how people always say I'm weird and stuff, though. I know it's going to be bad. It ...
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: Save a life.
Now if only Ice could sing. :( We'll just have to get David some emo-hair and some pink skinny jeans so he can sing this, won't we? Our work never ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Sariana
I've decided to delete this story and make some revisions.
Dec 8, 2008 -
Re: starting something
I counted twelve F-bombs. First off, I don't think that's really necessary. Second, what's the point of them? What's the point of this story? I can't quite figure out what's ...
Dec 8, 2008 -
Re: [deleted]
I am a deep lover for randomess. Glitter does make everything better, doesn't it? The poem goes from happy and joyful to moody and depressed. Reminds me of kindergarten when ...
Dec 7, 2008 -
Re: Reflection
I really like this poem. The words flow beautifully which makes for a very interesting poem. My only problem was with the repitition. It works with the poem, but it ...
Dec 7, 2008 -
Re: Dragon Hunters
Welcome to YWS! (I just joined too.. LOL.) I can't really say I like the idea of the story.. because I'm not sure what that idea is. Dragon Hunters? So ...
Dec 7, 2008 -
Re: Everlasting
It's too short, but that would make a good beginning. It's really hard for the reader to grasp what you're talking about. I love poems that rhyme, so I like ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: I love you? Yea right!
Judging by this, I think she at least knows hurt. I'm thirteen too, and I'm not a poet at all.. So, I have to say this: THAT WAS FANTASTICLY GREAT!
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: A Cutters Dream
The poem plot is personally, drastically overused. The first sentence is a nice start: My dream is to be better than I am now But, after that you just got ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: My pathetic love story Chap. 2
At first, when I started reading this.. I thought, "Just another Mary-Sue". But, reading further, Zac has his faults. It gives him depth. I like the story-line too. How Jane ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
Twilight. I'm not even saying that be I'm a down-right, absolute, positive hater. I'm saying that because it was BAD. It pretty much went like this: Bella: ZOMG, I just ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: What In The Jiminy Cricket Is Twilight?
It's a series written by a grown woman, even though it seems like a teenager's embarassing day dream. Vampires ripping open their love's stomachs to deliver children and I quote ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: Would you rather?
I'd rather go up in front of class and mumble like an idiot. Pssh, I do that already. Would you rather shave Rosie O' Donald's back or listen to Miley ...
Dec 4, 2008
