Hao_Nguyen

I liked it ^_^ But it kinda sounded simple. You could add some examples in there. Maybe more on the man's life and why he didn't have any of those ...

The idea is good and all, but it isn't written in a story format. It just seems like someone's schedule and their remarks. Also you could add a little more ...

Honestly it sounds like the movie, "One Missed Call" where a ghost sends messages out to people, telling them that they only have a little time until they die. The ...

The concept isn't bad at all, and with the idea with the blood capsules is very clever of you. However, like many would think, it is kinda random, and if ...