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Re: That's What Life Is (Extract 1)
Such an amazing and emotional piece, good job. There's just a few little things i think might need fixing to help the flow of your work. “Hi honey,” my mom ...
Nov 13, 2008 -
Re: Just breathe Out
Wow, That was just amazing! I can't find anything that needs improving about it. Good job, *Runs away to find and read more of your work*
Nov 13, 2008 -
Re: Peanut Butter Jelly Time
Thanks Guys! Sophie, He's a fox Terrier x Huntaway, really cute. I'll put some photos up when I can. And for everybody else: I dabble with my genres, I can't ...
Nov 13, 2008 -
Re: confession of a criminal
I'm still new to Reviewing work so sorry if this isn't very helpful. Most of the Grammatical Errors were already picked up and with Grammar not being my strong point ...
Nov 11, 2008 -
Re: Peanut Butter Jelly Time
Why Hello, I'm Hannah Just turned the big One Eight, Hurrah for me. I’m rather Bashful, a little Obsessive compulsive at times and place my foot firmly in my Mouth ...
Nov 11, 2008
